Bad Composition:

 In this shot the character is in the center of the frame. This is bad as it doesn't follow the rule of thirds. The character should be off center to balance the image. The tops of the buildings were shot straight on therefore not showing any leading lines. If we were to take this so again we should shoot it from a different angle.

In this shot there is another group filming with their tripod. I was in this shot therefore didn't see them in the background. But this ruins the image. The character to the right is out of focus to draw the viewer to the other character. The other character should be to the left hand of the to balance the image.

This image has the students in the center of the frame. They should be to the left or right of the image to make it look right. The refectory isn't shot straight on but the angle should have been different. If the lines of the buildings were shot differently the viewers eye would follow the lines.

The character of Katie is in the center of the image. She should be offset to balance the image and abide with the rule of thirds. The background is rather dull and needs to be changed. The cars are boring and spoil the image. The image could be shot near a path or fence to add leading lines to the image.

The handshake image has the hands central. They should be offset to follow the rule of thirds. There is the lines of the parking bays but it isn't very exciting. The image should be shot somewhere else to add leading lines to the image. This could be done by taking the photo near a fence chain or line of trees.

In this image the characters are not central in the frame. The car spoils the image. The photo needed t be outside of college but it could have been shot near the bikes to add leading lines to the image. The background wasn't thought about. If we were to take it again we would need to think about the background. EG trees or buildings.