Appraising the Rough Cut

Audio: 

Some of our audio is missing due to the camera not picking the sound up. This is okay as we can re-shoot the clip or just record the dialogue using the zoom mic. At the moment the sequence has some sound effects such as footsteps, car noises and some ambient music. To improve the sounds and dialoge we will re-record some of the dialogue and add some relevant sound effects. 

Special Effects:

On our schedule we have allocated time after the deadline of the rough cut to add our special effects. We should have taken this into consideration as we should have had the effects in the rough cut. But we are going to add our effects  in the next few lessons. The only bad side is that we cannot get feedback on the effects and we wont know how to improve them. 

Sequence:

As no one in our group is the very good at acting the acting in our sequence is average. It would have been better if we got people in to act in our sequence but we had a go at it anyway. The narrative of the sequence at the moment does make sense. It makes much more sense that the animatic that we made earlier in the year. The shots flow and are much shorter than the animatic that was made. I intend to improve the shot that has a bin in. I will also re-shoot the shot of Ben with him hood up. The next shot goes to Ben with his hood down. We need to keep his hood down for continuity.